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स्वतंत्रता दिवस कविता -


कितना खून बहया था
तब भी जिम्मेदारी उठाई थी
कितना समय गया था
पर आजादी तब भी पाई थी

जेल के चक्कर लगे थे खूब
परंतु हिम्मत नहीं हारे थे
भूखे, प्यासे, अपनों से दूर
भारत के लगाए नारे थे

ना नाम, ना पता, ना ही परिवार का ज्ञान
कई लोग ऐसे भी जुड़े थे
बस देश और देश के लोगों से प्यार
लेकर संग चले थे

गोलियाँ, यातना, ना जाने क्या-क्या
सहकर भी सीधे खड़े थे
दुश्मन के ऊपर हँसते हँसते
ही तो बरसाये गोले थे

आजादी का जशन जब मना था
आंखों में आंसू आए थे
याद करा था उन लोगों को जो
यह दिन नहीं देख पाए थे

ईट ईट से बना यह भारत
नींव बनी उनके जोश से
देश का झंडा जब जब उठा
आवाज आई बड़ी जोर से



Independence Day special



(the pics are subjected to Mahik's - Mahika Bansal... Kindly do not use them without giving credit to the author!)

Comments

  1. Deep description of those who stood as a wall for Azad Bharat

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  2. अतिउत्तम, सराहनीय कार्य, निरंतर प्रयासरत रहिये, जीते रहिये, ख़ूब खुश रहिये।

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  3. Long live dear
    Indeed a good effort

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  4. अति उत्तम, इस स्वतंत्रता दिवस के दिन इतनी खूबसूरत कविता एक प्यारी सी कवित्री द्वारा। बहुत खूब।👏👏👏

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  5. Great, very good Poem Mahika

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  6. Beautiful poem mahiks..... Love all your poems.😍

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  7. Great effort a beautiful reminder of unseen heroes who have given their life for nation

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  8. Good thoughts and well versed. God bless you. 👏👏

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  9. The words have touched the heart, very good

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  10. Vande Matram. Nicely written. It made us sit in time machine and revisited the time when sacrifices were made.

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  11. Very lovely expressions and words
    Wish all the success to you!!!
    Jai Hind!

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  12. This is so good, thanks for putting it out.. jai hind!

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  13. Very well written Mahika. Reminds of the time how r freedom fighters have made our nation independent.
    जय हिंद जय भारत

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  14. Just speechless! Our whole journey of freedom is so well expressed, infact it made me think of you as one of those old time poets who wished to mobilize public support!! This poem does the work🇮🇳🙌

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  15. Thank you so much for all the love and support! I was overwhelmed seeing the responses! This might be one of my most loved poem, I guess... Thank you all!

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  16. Very good Veer gatha
    From daughter of Bharat Mata

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  17. Wow Mahika you are jewell of our family .thoughts expressed well in hindi as well as in english

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  18. well done mahika nicely described.

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