The silent sea......
One day, I came across a sea
Refreshing tides was the sight I could see
Chattering leaves in the cold breeze
I wish the moment I could seize
I quietly sat down on the sand
It felt like a serene of the pleasant land
I thought it was the best place
For our strained mind to find a calm space
If one is alone or in pain
The entire smile he can gain.
Beautifully composed
ReplyDeleteBeautiful....full of positive wibes..well done n keep writing😊😍
ReplyDeletethank you.... but may i know your name?
DeleteVery nice composition
ReplyDeleteWell done Mahika..all the best for ur future n keep writing
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DeleteWell done Mahika.keep it up.
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DeleteNancy modi
ReplyDeleteWell done mahika....wish u a bright future.... Keep spreading ur positive vibes through ur words....
thanks :)
DeleteVery good Mahika. Keep it up!
ReplyDeletethank you :)
DeleteWell done mahika, keep it up, waiting for ur another blog soon.
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DeleteVery well written Mahika!! You deserve a lot of appreciation.Keep writing such beautiful messages.
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DeleteBeautiful lines Mahika..keep it up
ReplyDeleteKeep going sis 👍👍👍
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines...keep it up Mahika
ReplyDeleteDeep thought wonderfully expressed
ReplyDeleteGreat job Mahika..keep it up..👍👌
ReplyDeletePriti..Well done Mahika.keep it up!
ReplyDeleteIt is awesome
ReplyDeleteWow!well done Mahika....keep it up
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DeleteTanvi
ReplyDeleteWow!well done Mahika...keep it up
Tanvi...
ReplyDeleteWell done Mahika...keep it up
Fantastic Mahiku....Nice Going...Keep up the good work....Well done..����
ReplyDeleteGood going gal..!!!! Fly high wid ur words.. kp d poet wid in u alive always.. lots of luv n luck
ReplyDeletethank you so much
DeleteKavya Mittal ......mast poem hai
ReplyDeleteVery interesting poem Mahika
ReplyDeleteKeep it up mahika ... Beautiful words
ReplyDeleteCommendable effort Mahika....U have an extremely talented n creative poet within you.....let your thoughts flow in d stream of your fresh n innocent poetry....Keep this passion of yours going.. God bless!!
ReplyDeleteWell done Mahika, I wish u become a famous writer
ReplyDeletethanks :)
DeleteThe best part of your poetry is the positivity, always keep it in you. Never let the pinch of positivity comes down. Great work. I missed the opportunity to meet you in Ramnagar.
ReplyDeletethanks a lot......Will meet you sometime :)
DeleteAbsolutely Wonderful. Nice Work..
ReplyDeleteDeep thoughts mahiku..nice lines waiting for the next poet ..keep writing :)
ReplyDeleteU r rocking . Ur thought is like the endless sea... It's beautiful
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